total chaos

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by the reconstructionist (lucifer doesn't exist. he is only the planet venus personified!) on Thursday, 11-Jun-2009 16:07:09

realms of chaos
synapses collapse.
the precipice of disaster found.
paranoid; noise so loud nothing penetrates from the external world.
Crisis: the world folds.
Delusions: the final collapse.

Post 2 by Sword of Sapphire (Whether you agree with my opinion or not, you're still gonna read it!) on Thursday, 11-Jun-2009 21:58:07

This is great! It's a perfect discription of total chaos and utter destruction.

Post 3 by metal angel (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Saturday, 13-Jun-2009 19:03:01

Aggreed! Awesome writing! You could have expanded on it, but I still love it!

Post 4 by Corpse-Grinder (Veteran Zoner) on Wednesday, 17-Jun-2009 16:26:53

That was pretty awsome. It reminded me of Havic from Mortal Kombat. lol I agree with Metal Angel on the part of it being longer. Good job though.